Rent, Discovery Draft

This is my first draft of the critical review of Rent the musical. I have also included the Progress Report.

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2 thoughts on “Rent, Discovery Draft

  1. Notes for Peer’s Oral Response

    Essay # _____

    Writer ______________________________ Peer Respondent ______________________________

    Instructions: Listen to the essay carefully. Take at least two minutes after the reading to complete the following notes, and then share your reactions orally with the writer. Submit the completed form to your teacher at the end of the Peer Response activity.

    (+) What works? (praise)

    I think comparing the broadway show and the dvd version is really well-done.
    Organized
    In-depth, I actually understand the gist of the movie without watching it yet.
    The information given really makes to this story makes sense without watching it.
    Flows, doesn’t sound out of order

    (-) What Doesn’t (polish)
    I really don’t want to give you wrong pointers so I am not going say much in this area because I think it is a great review. I am sure you are going to go over the essay many times which will make this review even better.

    (?) Questions?

    none

  2. Notes for Peer’s Oral Response

    Essay # _____

    Writer ______________________________ Peer Respondent ______________________________

    Instructions: Listen to the essay carefully. Take at least two minutes after the reading to complete the following notes, and then share your reactions orally with the writer. Submit the completed form to your teacher at the end of the Peer Response activity.

    (+) What works? (praise)
    You did a really good job comparing the broadway show to the movie. I have seen neither, but after listening to your review it definently makes me more excited to go and watch either one. Your review was really detailed and intresting.

    (-) What Doesn’t (polish)
    Hmmm, like I said it was a job well done. You covered all the bases. I don’t really read reviews so I wouldn’t know what is missing. But if anything maybe you could compare it to other popular plays.
    (?) Questions?

    none

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